Hello Alex, I really enjoy the details within your photos you have shared. You have found stable textures, patterns, variations, contrast (with black and with colors), lights/shadows, and bright composition within your arrangement as a whole. The focal point is pleasant, especially since it is not all in the middle. The lines lead my eye to different areas from the focal point smoothly. Excellent work!
Top image: The red shape in the center, is well, in the center. Is that the focal point? My eye goes directly to it. Try to move the focal point off center. You might also try some other arrangement of elements - red is a powerful color & here, the red that is spotted around many edges, pulls my eye all over. They create distractions rather than unity. 4th image is most successful. The color unites & the focal point, where the elements meet, is off to the right. The dark area works well to add a contrasting element. The entire image could be in sharper focus.
Alex, I really like the last photo. The different shapes and directions with the lines creates a good balance. The lighting in the back is a little strong, I wonder would it create a stronger photo. I like the second photo as well. The different bright colors along with the dark colored brick. Its a good mixture of dark and light colors.
I chose the above photo to critique because I was immediately drawn to the setting and the multiple layers of people and subjects interactin...
Hello Alex, I really enjoy the details within your photos you have shared. You have found stable textures, patterns, variations, contrast (with black and with colors), lights/shadows, and bright composition within your arrangement as a whole. The focal point is pleasant, especially since it is not all in the middle. The lines lead my eye to different areas from the focal point smoothly. Excellent work!
ReplyDeleteTop image: The red shape in the center, is well, in the center. Is that the focal point? My eye goes directly to it. Try to move the focal point off center. You might also try some other arrangement of elements - red is a powerful color & here, the red that is spotted around many edges, pulls my eye all over. They create distractions rather than unity.
ReplyDelete4th image is most successful. The color unites & the focal point, where the elements meet, is off to the right. The dark area works well to add a contrasting element. The entire image could be in sharper focus.
Alex, I really like the last photo. The different shapes and directions with the lines creates a good balance. The lighting in the back is a little strong, I wonder would it create a stronger photo. I like the second photo as well. The different bright colors along with the dark colored brick. Its a good mixture of dark and light colors.
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